Saturday, 20 March 2010

NEGLECTED ELDERS

Posted by Saras at 04:01

Never did they Lie
Explain they always  did
Great souls of wisdom
Languishing  in  lonely life
Eschewing their past moments
Caring for little kids
Trying to spend time
Eagerly needing the affection
Daring death  to  come



Enormous is their contribution
Lasting for everlasting time
Diligently carved for generations
Enshrined in their tales
Religiously shared with  children
Save them from neglect
For Acrosticonly

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15 Comments:

  1. Amity said...
    20 March 2010 at 17:08  
    You pictured elders in a very positive way! Let us care for them so that our kids will also do the same way!

    Am almost there....:))
    Vinay Leo R. said...
    20 March 2010 at 22:26  
    very good work... let us care for them indeed!
    lakshmi said...
    21 March 2010 at 04:11  
    great one for the elders
    Saras said...
    21 March 2010 at 08:59  
    @Amity, @Leo
    Thanks dear.
    @Lakshmi
    Thanks. Glad you liked it. Hey you haven't seen the rest of my posts!There are many Acrostics.
    Nalini Hebbar said...
    22 March 2010 at 02:24  
    That is one tradition that I like about us Indians...but the fast lifestyle has eroded it to a large extend...the fall of the joint family has hit this section of the family the most.
    rdl said...
    22 March 2010 at 18:58  
    very good acrostic!
    lakshmi said...
    23 March 2010 at 03:44  
    Hello Sarasji
    yes not seen before, but now am reading your acrostics....I really like the way you put words....One friend has been asking me to try it out....
    good day
    Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...
    23 March 2010 at 04:13  
    How very true indeed! You put a universal touch to this issue Saras. It seems that even in old traditions, where Elders used to be highly respected, has fallen prey to this problem. As an elder, I see the truth of what you say in my daily life.
    Shanthi Krishnakumar said...
    23 March 2010 at 07:58  
    Good with an excellent message
    Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...
    12 September 2011 at 20:18  
    beautiful message in this one, well done.



    ;)
    Jack Edwards Poetry said...
    13 September 2011 at 04:54  
    Powerful poem, in a form I have not seen in a while.

    Here is my entry
    http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/09/rose.html
    Anonymous said...
    13 September 2011 at 05:44  
    really nice! my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/04/09/summer-wind/
    Anonymous said...
    13 September 2011 at 12:05  
    Wonderful message, well done form!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/i-am-loved/
    Ann LeFlore said...
    13 September 2011 at 16:27  
    so wonderful the way you picture elders
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/08/27/the-island-breeze/
    Anonymous said...
    14 September 2011 at 14:49  
    Like your poem:)
    I wrote on in this format awhile back as well. well done on this one

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