Thursday, 11 March 2010
Wind flowing gently
Kissing all plants
Sweet smell Roses
Dance baby Dance
Roses smell sweet
Plants all kissing
Gently flowing Wind
Kissing all plants
Sweet smell Roses
Dance baby Dance
Roses smell sweet
Plants all kissing
Gently flowing Wind
Labels: Naisaiku
12 Comments:
this is one of those forms that enchant me but im somehow never able to try my hand at this..
Someday i shall do this too..
Thanks for the visit in my blog.
So this is a Naisaiku? I am following one good writer like you who loves writing this form of poetry...Sue of Tumblewords...:)
Lovely poetry Saras!
It's my first visit to your blog and I am liking it here.
Keep up the good work.
Cheers!!
and I dropped in on a nice thoughtful post! :)
good write! :)
Thank you.
@Megzone
Thanks. You can do it, it is no big deal.
@Nalini
This should be a piece of cake for you!
@Vidya
Thanks.
@Amity
Thanks for visiting.
@Chatterbox
Thank you. Please come often.
@Leo
I know, I have to really attract you into visiting!!
Thanks dear.
@Vibhuti
Yes, it is a form of poetry under Naisaiku variety.You can do it. Just give it a try and you will be amazed to see your talent!
Brilliant work, you really have the knack for this!