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Monday, 19 September 2011
Bubbles
Posted by Saras at
15:17
Don't restrain thought
Let it raise like the bubbles
To higher levels
For
Haiku-Heights
Labels:
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17 Comments:
Saru Singhal
said...
19 September 2011 at 16:08
Beautiful and these thoughts will bring joy in life!!!
Nanka
said...
19 September 2011 at 22:28
Hmmm...if mind is not inquisitive then it cannot grow to the next level!! Well thought!!
Tigerbrite
said...
20 September 2011 at 06:45
Always ready for new ideas.
Susie Clevenger
said...
20 September 2011 at 15:13
A good one...let the ideas come
Gemma Wiseman
said...
20 September 2011 at 16:10
Wonderful advice poetically expressed!
Magical Mystical Teacher
said...
20 September 2011 at 16:59
Thoughts as rising bubbles...delightful image!
Nibbling Bubbles
blue ocean waves
said...
20 September 2011 at 17:19
beautiful message.
knot2share
said...
20 September 2011 at 19:05
I am trying that right now!
Ramesh Sood
said...
20 September 2011 at 22:40
Good one..
Anonymous
said...
21 September 2011 at 01:40
What a great image!
Uma Anandane
said...
21 September 2011 at 01:53
That an important thing to do in life esp.for writers like us :)
andy sewina
said...
21 September 2011 at 02:13
I can see your thoughts floating! Phew!
Traci B
said...
21 September 2011 at 06:00
Excellent advice and use of the prompt. :)
One suggestion: You might want to either take the "s" off "thoughts" or change "it" to "them" in the second line.
Saras
said...
21 September 2011 at 07:26
@Traci
Indeed! I have made the change. Thank you.
@Everyone
Thanks.
dsnake1
said...
21 September 2011 at 08:18
why not? good advice!
Rek Sesh
said...
21 September 2011 at 11:01
Well said...liked this haiku. :)
Anonymous
said...
21 September 2011 at 12:07
A lovely haiku.
Amazing how high our thoughts can go if we let them.
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Nibbling Bubbles
One suggestion: You might want to either take the "s" off "thoughts" or change "it" to "them" in the second line.
Indeed! I have made the change. Thank you.
@Everyone
Thanks.
Amazing how high our thoughts can go if we let them.