Monday, 19 September 2011

Bubbles

Don't restrain  thought
Let it raise like the bubbles
To higher levels


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17 Comments:

  1. Saru Singhal said...
    Beautiful and these thoughts will bring joy in life!!!
    Nanka said...
    Hmmm...if mind is not inquisitive then it cannot grow to the next level!! Well thought!!
    Tigerbrite said...
    Always ready for new ideas.
    Susie Clevenger said...
    A good one...let the ideas come
    Gemma Wiseman said...
    Wonderful advice poetically expressed!
    Magical Mystical Teacher said...
    Thoughts as rising bubbles...delightful image!



    Nibbling Bubbles
    blue ocean waves said...
    beautiful message.
    knot2share said...
    I am trying that right now!
    Ramesh Sood said...
    Good one..
    imnotaverse said...
    What a great image!
    Umamaheswari said...
    That an important thing to do in life esp.for writers like us :)
    andy sewina said...
    I can see your thoughts floating! Phew!
    Traci B said...
    Excellent advice and use of the prompt. :)

    One suggestion: You might want to either take the "s" off "thoughts" or change "it" to "them" in the second line.
    Saras said...
    @Traci
    Indeed! I have made the change. Thank you.
    @Everyone
    Thanks.
    dsnake1 said...
    why not? good advice!
    Reka Sang said...
    Well said...liked this haiku. :)
    mjshorts said...
    A lovely haiku.
    Amazing how high our thoughts can go if we let them.

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