Sunday, 7 February 2010

PHOENIX

Posted by Saras at 02:22

Perished on a pyre
Had the strong will
Overwhelming the natural elements
Evolved itself once again
Never accepting the defeat
Immortalized in the history
Xenolithic to be re-born

For Acrosticonly

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5 Comments:

  1. Tulika said...
    7 February 2010 at 02:31  
    Adroit truly !!

    This one's just too good.!!
    Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...
    7 February 2010 at 02:31  
    I have run our of adjectives to describe your wonderful acrostics ... I love the use of the words, "pyre" and "xenolithic", enjoyed the path you took with the phoenix metaphor of these elements.
    Saras said...
    7 February 2010 at 02:39  
    @Tulika
    Thank you dear!
    @Amias
    Its your love for Acrostic Poetry and a very kind heart which made you say such nice words of appreciation, I feel honoured.
    vidya said...
    9 February 2010 at 13:36  
    wow! You polished this acro beautifully with your words.
    Miss Sunshine said...
    28 February 2010 at 07:17  
    very powerful :)

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