Thursday, 25 August 2011

My Love - Attempt at WAKA!

When I close my eyes
I can see your charming face
When I breathe the Air
I can feel your gentle Care
Caressing my labored heart

For The Purple TreeHouse and Gooseberry Garden

2 Comments:

  1. The Gooseberry Garden said...
    this is lovely tanka.

    Thanks for sharing...

    you may link to poetry picnic week 2 again, since you need more feedback.

    bless your weekend.
    Promising Poets Parking Lot said...
    very sweet and beautiful one.

    :)

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