Thursday, 25 August 2011

My Love - Attempt at WAKA!

When I close my eyes
I can see your charming face
When I breathe the Air
I can feel your gentle Care
Caressing my labored heart

For The Purple TreeHouse and Gooseberry Garden


  1. The Gooseberry Garden said...
    this is lovely tanka.

    Thanks for sharing...

    you may link to poetry picnic week 2 again, since you need more feedback.

    bless your weekend.
    Promising Poets Parking Lot said...
    very sweet and beautiful one.


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