Thursday 25 August 2011

My Love - Attempt at WAKA!

Posted by Saras at 11:36

When I close my eyes
I can see your charming face
When I breathe the Air
I can feel your gentle Care
Caressing my labored heart

For The Purple TreeHouse and Gooseberry Garden

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2 Comments:

  1. Jingle Poetry At Olive Garden said...
    28 August 2011 at 07:32  
    this is lovely tanka.

    Thanks for sharing...

    you may link to poetry picnic week 2 again, since you need more feedback.

    bless your weekend.
    Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-Walton said...
    4 November 2011 at 18:01  
    very sweet and beautiful one.

    :)

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